The song is called Al after retracking I think it's getting close.. Any issues here?

http://www.box.net/shared/0d6cbvugwg

I dont think you should be asking for advice here - you should be giving it!
Very well done, it sounds pro level to me. Its a complex tune, and it seems to me you captured a lot of nuance.
This is just a matter of taste, but I think you could 'fill out' the lead vocal a bit, other than that, I think that is what a lot of us aspire to.
Nicely done

Thanks Rob, I guess I'll stamp this one done if no one else has anything

wow..nice song u provided. instrument played well.

*sorry for my broken english